Tuesday, 09 December 2008
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Gone
I can almost see her, Like a faded memory that has been burned into the depths of my soul.
I can almost feel her, as I try to grasp my thoughts around all she stands for.
I reach out, but can not seem to touch her.
I try, and try again.
I blink my eyes as the tears start streaming, my vision has become clouded.
She's still here...somewhere, somehow.
People begin to fall all around me, people I have once know and loved.
I can not seem to reach them either.
Desperately clinging to what I thought I once was, I begin to fall as well.
I have lost her...she is gone.
will I ever be able to find her?
Where have I gone?
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... we lose ourselves
There will always be times in which we lose ourselves.
It's up to you to bring yourself back again.
Very nice post.
it happens. life wears away at us
when you find her, tell her i miss her.
That was beautiful and falls so much in line with how I'm feeling right now. I so wish I could find myself, but can't seem to gain any ground when I do try!
soon. you'll find a better, more experienced, wiser her...
Time passes. Things change. Eventually you find your way back or you become at peace with the way things are.
I loved that. And you WILL find her!
Good writing Holly.
You have my thoughts & prayers. I can relate to what is written here more than you know. Hang in there.
look in the mirror. you are still there. just wipe away all the dirt and fog that is blurring your image and all will be clear.
you gotta ask yourself "what do i have to wipe away to see myself again?"
Beautiful. I really do enjoy your writing, Holly.
That was a great post. When you find her, you'll know that the wait was worth it.
Love the poetry, and I'm sorry for the loss of your friend. Death is something that is hard to deal with when it happens, and continues to be hard. Best of luck.
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Beautiful & heart felt. Will be praying for you. God bless.
Very good, as always. =]
your entry reminds me of mine.
Be ok, if not today, then someday soon?
I'll pray for you.
Awww! I wish I could hug you, but my arms won't be able to fit through the screen! best wishes anyways
thanks for the comment.
Once again you astound me with your writing skills. I only wish I could write something as deep and heartfelt as this.
hi, i was just passing by..i love your poem, i think life is an endless search for who we are, trying to find ourselves among the rest of the world..ok not sure if that made any sense..
anyway, i hope you don't mind me subscribing to your xanga :)
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